Wednesday, May 17, 2006

Kanimo sinuwat ni balma

duul Kanimo
gusto ko duul diha Kanimo
ingun sila dili ko angay
muhisgut bahin Kanimo
apan,
muduul ako Kanimo.

musabot?
wa ko masayod
kung aduna'y nakasabot
apan, nadiskubrehan kong
mas tam-is ang pagkuyog
nga wala'y rason.

busa,
muduul ako
diha
Kanimo.

29 Comments:

Anonymous joracrac said...

kinsa naman pud ni bal?

1:26 PM  
Anonymous joracrac said...

controversial jud nang imong ipangsulat..

1:26 PM  
Anonymous balma said...

hala uy! dili ni gugma-gugma noh! :p

1:31 PM  
Anonymous balma said...

kabantay ko, controbersyal gyud... hahaha!

1:31 PM  
Anonymous joracrac said...

managhan napud imo comments ani hahahahhaha...
magtagna kung kinsa ni siya...

1:38 PM  
Anonymous balma said...

hala uy! grabe pud! di ni siya tawo uy... pwede siya si Lord.. pwede sad siya representation of something, like a hobby or addiction (aw, di hnuon ko adik! haha).

1:42 PM  
Blogger aCey said...

adik?! si balma...?! ^_^

1:45 PM  
Anonymous joracrac said...

si LOrd ni

1:45 PM  
Anonymous balma said...

uhuh ;) and something else ;)

1:49 PM  
Anonymous joracrac said...

pagkaon ni noh? baboy?

2:00 PM  
Anonymous balma said...

hoy! grabe na gyud ka racrac! sumbong tika sa imo lolo wang lung run.... :-D

2:04 PM  
Anonymous joracrac said...

ganahan na noon ko ma lolo si wan lung
balma sab oi, mahimo nako anig traydor sa akong angkan..

2:07 PM  
Blogger aCey said...

diba ingon ka, bal, na pwede ni si lord, pwede sab ug "writing..."? ^_^

ngee, rac-rac... "you! betrayer!" (copied from wrong grammar na chinese films with english subtitles).

2:11 PM  
Anonymous joracrac said...

hahahahhahahahha...
mag harakiri nalang ko kay wala na nadaot na akong pagkatao sa akong angkan..

2:13 PM  
Anonymous joracrac said...

pero bal feeling jud nako food ni.. or book.. or "sir Pyke"?

2:14 PM  
Blogger aCey said...

jo, ayaw usa pag seppuku/harakiri... wa pa gani ka gibangungot ug ni-turn into a hairy guy! ^_^

2:18 PM  
Anonymous balma said...

sir pyke --- HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ka-funny pud uy.

yeah, writing... :-)

2:18 PM  
Anonymous joracrac said...

magpa ep-ep nalang ko para maka harakiri... kung dili jud pwede idi mangita nalang ko ug pisi sa luyo ug mag bigti..

hahahahaha
ngeee balma pa "writing" dayon maski sir Pyke gud.. joke

yah ako na nagets ang poem... gamay!!

2:22 PM  
Anonymous balma said...

yey! na-gets.

...gamay

2:23 PM  
Anonymous buwantama said...

para ni ni Lord ug sa soccer! hahaha

2:37 PM  
Anonymous balma said...

ngek, ngek, ngek... soccer? :-/ naa ko'y plano mu-escapo kadyut, haha

8:56 PM  
Anonymous buwantama said...

go balma! escapo gyud! hahaha! ayaw na lagi mu pag soccer!

9:05 PM  
Blogger aCey said...

ay, kung dili na sila mag-soccer, wa na ko'y team na i-manage! hmph.

5:13 PM  
Blogger aCey said...

and i won't be able to make up for the many times i was missing in action... haha. (pamanager-manager! tigbantay ra diay to sa mga bag!) hehe.

5:14 PM  
Anonymous joracrac said...

balma..... por pabor!!! ayaw intawon mawadan nami ug asset ug mawadan nako ug awayon huhuhuhuhu...
ayaw too anang jianna demonyeta...

Ace... wala paman nag sugod imo real job..

8:43 PM  
Blogger theresianangbisdak said...

bal, sa pag-capitalize pa lang sa "Kanimo", klaro na nga dapat "religious" ang reading sa imong balak. Just want to point out a good line that reinforces that manner of reading your poem. Pag-ingon nimo nga "mas nindot nga walat rason", this must've come from the idea nga "where faith begins, reason ends."

to everybody: mao ni ang kanunay ibutang sa hunahuna each time you're confronted with a new poem. try to realize first kon unsay tuyo sa balak o unsay gusto niyang isulti. from there, you'd know the best way to read that poem. different poems demand different ways of reading. magkalain-lain ang iyang intensyon.

in the case of bal's poem, it's almost like a prayer submitting oneself to one's faith, and to "Kanimo" as an embodiment of that faith.

nanghinaut ko nga mosulat ka pa og daghan nga balak, bal, hangtud gyud nimo ma-internalize and pag-gamit sa mga images as representations of things or Somebody more lofty or divine.

Padayon!

10:20 AM  
Anonymous balma said...

:-)

5:01 PM  
Blogger aCey said...

sus, grabe na jud ang wisdom ni sir j, noh! sakto kaayo.

12:58 PM  
Anonymous balma said...

hahaha. "wisdom" gyud? :-D

6:45 PM  

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